Story of the Hero Makoma African Folktale
African myth of the Hero.
Makoma is a brilliant African folktale legend about the giant Hero Makoma who
would find no rest until he fought against five powerful giants.
African folktales
are stories forming part of an oral storytelling tradition shaped by the
tongues of African elders passed down from one generation to the next.
Once upon a time, at the town of Senna on the banks of the African river
the Zambezi, was born a child.
He was not like other children, for he was very
tall and strong; over his shoulder he carried a big sack, and in his hand an
iron hammer. He could also speak like a grown man, but usually he was very
silent.
One day his mother said to him: 'My child, by what name shall we know
you?'
And he answered: 'Call all the head men of Senna here to the river's
bank.' And his mother called the head men of the town, and when they had come
he led them down to a deep black pool in the river where all the fierce
crocodiles lived.
'O great men!' he said, while they all listened, 'which of you will leap
into the pool and overcome the crocodiles?' But no one would come forward. So
he turned and sprang into the water and disappeared.
The people held their breath, for they thought: 'Surely the boy is
bewitched and throws away his life, for the crocodiles will eat him!' Then
suddenly the ground trembled, and the pool, heaving and swirling, became red
with blood, but suddenly the boy was seen rising to the surface swimming on
shore.
But he was no longer just a boy! He was stronger than any man and very
tall and handsome, so that the people shouted with gladness when they saw him.
'Now, O my people!' he cried, waving his hand, 'you know my name—I am
Makoma, "the Greater"; for have I not slain the crocodiles into the pool
where none would venture?'
Then he said to his mother: 'Rest gently, my mother, for I go to make a
home for myself and become a hero.' Then, entering his hut he took Nu-endo, his
iron hammer, and throwing the sack over his shoulder, he went away.
Makoma crossed the Zambezi, and for many moons he wandered towards the
north and west until he came to a very hilly country where, one day, he met a
huge giant making mountains.
'Greetings,' shouted Makoma, 'Who are you?'
'I am Chi-eswa-mapiri, who makes the mountains,' answered the giant;
'and who are you?'
'I am Makoma, which signifies "greater,"' he answered.
'Greater than who?' asked the giant.
'Greater than you!' answered Makoma.
The giant gave a roar and rushed upon him. Makoma said nothing, but
swinging his great hammer, he struck the giant upon the head.
He struck him so hard a blow that the giant shrank into a little man,
who fell upon his knees saying: 'You are indeed greater than I, O Makoma; take
me with you to be your slave!' So Makoma picked him up and dropped him into the
sack that he carried upon his back.
He was greater than ever now, for all the giant's strength had gone into
him; and he resumed his journey, carrying his burden with as little difficulty
as an eagle might carry a mouse.
Before long he came to a country broken up with huge stones and immense
clods of earth. Looking over one of the heaps he saw a giant wrapped in dust
dragging out the very earth and hurling it in handfuls on either side of him.
'Who are you,' cried Makoma, 'that pulls up the earth in this way?'
'I am Chi-dubula-taka,' said he, 'and I am making the river-beds.'
'Do you know who I am?' said Makoma. 'I am he that is called
"greater"!'
'Greater than who?' thundered the giant.
'Greater than you!' answered Makoma.
With a shout, Chi-dubula-taka seized a great clod of earth and launched
it at Makoma. But the hero had his sack held over his left arm and the stones
and earth fell harmlessly upon it, and, tightly gripping his iron hammer, he
rushed in and struck the giant to the ground.
Chi-dubula-taka groveled before him, all the while growing smaller and
smaller; and when he had become a small size Makoma picked him up and put him
into the sack beside Chi-eswa-mapiri.
He went on his way even greater than before, as all the river-maker's
power had become his; and at last he came to a forest of baobab and thorn
trees. He was astonished at their size, for everyone was full grown and larger
than any trees he had ever seen, and close by he saw Chi-gwisa-miti, the giant
who was planting the forest.
Chi-gwisa-miti was taller than either of his brothers, but Makoma was
not afraid, and called out to him: 'Who are you, O Big One?'
'I,' said the giant, 'am Chi-gwisa-miti, and I am planting these baobabs
and thorns as food for my children the elephants.'
'Leave off!' shouted the hero, 'for I am Makoma, and would like to
exchange a blow with thee!'
The giant, plucking up a monster baobab tree by the roots, struck
heavily at Makoma; but the hero sprang aside, and as the weapon sank deep into
the soft earth, he whirled his hammer round his head and felled the giant with
one blow.
So terrible was the stroke that Chi-gwisa-miti shriveled up as the other
giants had done; and when he had got back his breath he begged Makoma to take
him as his servant. 'For,' said he, 'it is honorable to serve a man so great as
you.'
Makoma, after placing him in his sack, proceeded upon his journey, and
travelling for many days he at last reached a country so barren and rocky that
not a single living thing grew upon it—everywhere reigned grim desolation. And
in the midst of this dead region he found a man eating fire.
'What are you doing?' demanded Makoma.
'I am eating fire,' answered the man, laughing; 'and my name is
Chi-idea-moto, for I am the flame-spirit, and can waste and destroy what I
like.'
'You are wrong,' said Makoma; 'for I am Makoma, who is
"greater" than you—and you cannot destroy me!'
The fire-eater laughed again, and blew a flame at Makoma. But the hero
sprang behind a rock—just in time, for the ground upon which he had been
standing was turned to molten glass, like an over baked pot, by the heat of the
flame-spirit's breath.
Then the hero flung his iron hammer at Chi-idea-moto, and, striking him,
it knocked him helpless; so Makoma placed him in the sack, with the other great
men that he had overcome.
And now, truly, Makoma was a very great hero; for he had the strength to
make hills, the industry to lead rivers over dry land, foresight and wisdom in
planting trees, and the power of producing fire when he wished.
Wandering on he arrived one day at a great plain, well watered and full
of game; and in the very middle of it, close to a large river, was a grassy
spot, very pleasant to make a home upon.
Makoma was so delighted with the little meadow that he sat down under a
large tree and removing the sack from his shoulder, took out all the giants and
set them before him. 'My friends,' said he, 'I have travelled far and am weary.
Is not this a place as would suit a hero for his home? Let us then go, and
tomorrow to bring in timber to make huts encircled by a corral.'
So the next day Makoma and the giants set out to get poles to begin
building, leaving only Chi-eswa-mapiri, the maker of mountains to look after
the place and cook some venison which they had killed. In the evening, when
they returned, they found the giant helpless and tied to a tree by one enormous
hair!
'How is it,' said Makoma, astonished, 'that we find you bound and
helpless?'
'O Chief,' answered Chi-eswa-mapiri, 'at mid-day a man came out of the
river; he was of immense statue, and his grey moustaches were of such length
that I could not see where they ended! He demanded of me "Who is thy
master?" And I answered: "Makoma, the greatest of heroes." Then
the man seized me, and pulling a hair from his moustache, tied me to this
tree—as you see me now.'
Makoma was extremely angry
but, he said nothing, and drawing his finger-nail across the hair (which
was as thick and strong as palm rope) cut it, and set free the mountain maker.
The three following days exactly the same thing happened, only each time
with a different one of the party; and on the fourth day Makoma stayed in camp
when the others went to cut poles, saying that he would see for himself what
sort of man this was that lived in the river and whose moustaches were so long
that they extended beyond men's sight.
So when the giants had gone he swept and tidied the camp and put some
venison on the fire to roast. At midday, when the sun was right overhead, he
heard a rumbling noise from the river, and looking up he saw the head and
shoulders of an enormous man emerging from it. And behold! Right down the
riverbed and up the riverbed, till they faded into the blue distance, stretched
the giant's grey moustaches!
'Who are you?' bellowed the giant, as soon as he was out of the water.
'I am he that is called Makoma,' answered the hero; 'and, before I slay
thee, tell me also what is thy name and what you do in the river?'
'My name is Chin-debou Mau-giri,' said the giant. 'My home is in the
river, for my moustache is the grey fever-mist that hangs above the water, and
with which I bind all those that come unto me so that they die.'
'You cannot bind me!' shouted Makoma, rushing upon him and striking with
his hammer. But the river giant was so slimy that the blow slid harmlessly off
his green chest, and as Makoma stumbled and tried to regain his balance, the
giant swung one of his long hairs around him and tripped him up.
For a moment Makoma was helpless, but remembering the power of the
flame-spirit which had entered into him, he breathed a fiery breath upon the
giant's hair and cut himself free.
As Chin-debou Mau-giri leaned forward to seize him the hero flung his
sack over the giant's slippery head, and gripping his iron hammer, struck him
again; this time the blow landed upon the dry sack and Chin-debou Mau-giri fell
dead.
When the four giants returned at sunset with the poles, they rejoiced to
find that Makoma had overcome the river spirit, and they feasted on the roast
venison far into the night; but in the morning, when they awoke, Makoma was
already warming his hands to the fire, and his face was gloomy.
'In the darkness of the night, O my friends,' he said presently, 'the
white spirits of my father’s came upon me and spoke, saying: " Makoma, you
will have no rest until you find and fought with Sakatirina, who had five
heads, and is big and strong; so take leave of your friends, for you must go
alone."'
Then the giants were very sad, and grieved the loss of their hero; but
Makoma comforted them, and gave back to each the gifts he had taken from them.
Then bidding them 'Farewell,' he went on his way.
Makoma travelled far towards the west; over rough mountains and water
logged jungles, crossing deep rivers, and walking for days across dry deserts
where most men would have died, until at length he arrived at a hut standing
near some large peaks, and inside the hut were two beautiful women.
'Greeting!' said the hero. 'Is this the country of Sakatirina of five
heads, whom I am seeking?'
'We greet you, O Great One!' answered the women. 'We are the wives of
Sakatirina; your search is at an end, for there stands he whom you seek!' And
they pointed to what Makoma had thought were two tall mountain peaks. 'Those
are his legs,' they said; 'his body you cannot see, for it is hidden in the
clouds.'
Makoma was astonished when he saw how tall the giant was; but, he was
not scared, he went forward until he reached one of Sakatirina's legs, which he
struck heavily with his hammer. Nothing happened, so he hit again and then
again until, presently, he heard a tired, far-away voice saying: 'Who is it
that scratches my feet?'
And Makoma shouted as loud as he could, answering: 'It is I, Makoma, who
is called "Greater"!' And he listened, but there was no answer.
Then Makoma collected all the dead brushwood and trees that he could
find, and making an enormous pile round the giant's legs, set a light to it.
This time the giant spoke; his voice was terrible, for it was the rumble
of thunder in the clouds. 'Who is it,' he said, 'making that fire smolder
around my feet?'
'It is I, Makoma!' shouted the hero. 'And I have come from far away to
see O Sakatirina, for the spirits of my father’s told me to seek and fight with
thee, for fear that I should grow fat, and weary of myself.'
There was silence for a while, and then the giant spoke softly: 'It is
good, O Makoma!' he said. 'For I too have grown weary. There is no man as great
as I, therefore I am all alone. Guard thyself!' and bending suddenly he seized
the hero in his hands and dashed him upon the ground. And behold! Instead of
death, Makoma had found life, for he sprang to his feet mightier in strength
and stature than before, and rushing in he gripped the giant by the waist and
wrestled with him.
Hour by hour they fought, and mountains rolled beneath their feet like
pebbles in a flood; now Makoma would break away, and summoning up his strength,
strike the giant with his iron hammer, and Sakatirina would pluck up the
mountains and hurl them upon the hero, but neither one could slay the other. At
last, upon the second day, they grappled so strongly that they could not break
away; but their strength was failing, and, just as the sun was sinking, they
fell together to the ground, unresponsive.
In the morning when they awoke, Mulimo the Great Spirit was standing by
them; and he said: 'O Makoma and Sakatirina! You are heroes so great that no
man may come against you. Therefore you will leave the world and take up your
home with me in the clouds.' And as he spoke the heroes became invisible to the
people of the Earth, and were no more seen among them.
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